Tuesday, February 2, 2010

hello, critique my work





tell me what you think about my shtuff.

5 comments:

  1. I enjoy how your pieces kind of convey motion, with the extra lines and patched together bits.

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  2. I like how your work, at least all that is posted on the blog is black and white. I like the contrast; it really helps it pop out and catches your eye. I also like how the work is full of detail, especially your "10 things" piece.
    -Beth

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  3. I especially like how you use smaller lines to create larger lines in this piece. The way you arranged the objects makes the whole piece feel really connected. Nice work!

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  4. I enjoy how you didn't just leave your drawings on a sheet of paper but instead put them on tiles. I also enjoy the lines used to emphasize where a shadow might be. I agree with Amanda, the smaller lines to make the bigger lines is also a good touch.

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  5. ward i like your lines man! but for real though i like your placement of objects here. it kind of has a direction, like the lines from the broken scissors bring my eye to the teabag and in turn the key. its over all a sweet piece

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